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Awake

lauren_catherine

If I stand on my tip-toes,
I can touch the sky
Gray clouds filling the space, unreached
/Pale light giving sight
To a view so divine,
I'd turn my back
and leave the world to lines
/Breathing in the atmosphere - a
rush of air so cool and clear -
As I raise my arms to the
wind
and fly
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDEFGHGCB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 272
Words 60
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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I have joined The Written Word in light of LuLu's closing.Also, before the May 4th closing, I am publishing a book of my poetry. It is entitled, Dance With Me. more…

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