applestar



there's a star in every apple, he said
taking a bite of his bottom half
he let the juice drip down his chin

and if the sun is a star, she said
taking her top half in careful fingers
then the universe is an apple, too

oh?
he asked through a mouthful of flesh
his eyes small and dark
like apple seeds
then what are we?

why,
she answered with a smile like a bodhisattva
we're the worms inside
even a worm needs an apple to call home

and as he looked at her laughing
he could have sworn
he saw
stars. . . .
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Submitted by CCR777 on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABX AXX XXXXX XBXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 484
Words 102
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 5, 4, 4

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