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across feathered skies

Storm

...and as if it wasn't enough
to see me reflected in your eyes,
I found someone who loved me
without passion's sweet disguise.

The moment souls connected,
enclosed in messaged miles,
you saw inside this soul of mine
and dried the tears I cried.

I love to feel your laughter
wrap around my feminine frame,
and know it was because of me
your joy is set aflame.

I wish to love you like no other,
watch you sleep in peaceful dreams,
to cuddle closer to your form
and rest in love's light beams.

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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XXXX CDBD CEXE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 475
Words 93
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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Storm

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ NOTE: 5 Feb 2011 - Dear All, I have deleted and then reinstated all my poems on my page so I could get rid of the bad atmosphere, 1-ratings and nasty tags there have been of late. I know this means I won't be in the leaderboard but that's OK.I want to start anew and more importantly, see if the number of rates match the reviews. If poems continue to be 1-rated, then I will know that Ian is/was not the only one cheating here.I apologise to all those who have previously commented on my poems. I am sorry your comments are no longer there.I regret any inconvenience caused. Happy writing to all! :)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~I am an enigma wrapped in a mystery ~ a flowerchild of the Universe. I am well travelled and love learning about different cultures.I have been writing poetry for 30 years, the last three of which I have written in earnest.I laugh my way through life and tears, searching for enlightenment. I don't suffer fools gladly.I am here to write, it is my passion. I am influenced by music, lyrics and the poetry of many people, too many to mention.I don't like pedestrian poetry or purple prose. I am never content with my poems, always striving to improve. I welcome critique. more…

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