erased

samael 2003 (Andhra Pradesh)



In a world when i was only erased
i would go to an island
far away from everyone
far away from people who care'bout me
students goes to school like nothing happened
friends chat with each other
the memories of me erased

in a world where i was only erased
i would sit on the beach
doing whatever i want
there i would think about the people i left behind
the world goes on like nothing happend

when i think about the world without me
i feel a sense of relief
coz there i would'nt fake my smile

why would i fake myself?
because i hope while performing it may become real one day
there,on that island i would be myself
myself which does'nt care about impressing others
myself which cries when it feel sad
myself which smiles thinking about the time when he's with others
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Submitted on March 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXCBXA AXXXA CXX DXDEXE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 748
Words 147
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 3, 6

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