To Break Free



How do we continue to feign a countenance for untarnished youth,
the pure or ignorant in mind and soul?
-A spring within the forest.

Do we continue to deny our lust to corrupt it?
-Surrounded by shedding dogwood.

Could it be that we are ashamed of ourselves,
a threat to our repletion?
-Three stepping pools.

That their frank judgement threatens that in which we stake our survival?
-A mist accompanying each.

Are we all orphaned minds stabbed by absent eyes?
-One sweet, one foul, and one beguiling.

Can we fast and step back?
-Down falls a fresh and full blossom.

Without faith, in careless oblivion?
-Landing gracefully within the foul fog.

To make a meal out of battered souls?
-It’s bright hue a flicker in the murk.

Giving up all power to the unknown?
-Ripples motion apart rotting congregants.

Or can we grasp at the remnants of innocence?
-A doe breaks through to drink.

To sanctify a treaty?
-Its twitching nose guiding toward a sweet bath.

To earn acknowledgment?
-Indulging and flooding her mouth.

To put down our wicked sheers?
-A sharp sneeze breaking up the mist.

To wipe off crumbs of generations past?
-Deceptive white dew catching its eye.

To wade through the dark?
-Her curious snout eager to taste.

To build an alter to a newborn set free?
-She eases the bloom toward fresher water.

To watch a world in chaos?
-Her snout entranced and circulating the pool.

To  writhe at every fall?
-Her nape loose, she marks her snack.

To fall at every torment?
-It meets her nose and crests atop.

To carve wretch into our wrists?
-A stream appears.

To break in awe as the door opens?
-To love and honor a stranger?

To gasp as they walk through?
-She grants reprieve, to watch light flee her wrath.
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Submitted by JasonLambertLee on February 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:30 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XX ABX XX XX CX BX XX BX XX DE XX AX XX XX DF XX XC XX XX XF XE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,663
Words 302
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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