My Women

Jimmy Lojewski 1983 (Michigan)



Her eyes change with her emotions
Reflections of a mysterious rainbow
Lost in a daze of confusion as tho a cold winter set in
She’s walks on water Glaring everywhere as a fire pit
Her time is heavenly sent no matter where she went
Explosions rage across the sea as I see a bright light
An orb of aggravation slightly shaking the nightly sky
Coming closer to me holding me with her memory
As her reflection slowly faded in and out from my eye
My insides trembled from her vibrations ready to fly away
The rain covered my eyes watching sparkles exploding
Right then and there I saw my women falling from heaven
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Submitted by jimmy_l on February 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHGIJK
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 602
Words 113
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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  • jimmy_l
    This is my spiritual poem for my very first wife and it will have a lot of meaning for others to read and comprehend in there everyday lives towards there loved ones or friends.
    LikeReply3 years ago

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