Life without you



They're your friends
But you're gone now

We're here for you they all claim
What you're going through is normal

We understand
We love you

They don't even know me
I've only ever met a few of them, briefly

How can you love someone you don't know?
You knew me, mostly

I stand on the abyss screaming
You have no clue who I am

You wouldn't like me if you did
I've been dislikeable all my life

While you were with me
There's was finally someone who cared

But you're gone now
There's no reason for me to go on

Except our daughter
A fully grown adult

For her I have to live
The rest of my life without you

I hate this life
I despise this world

Life without you
Is surely not worth living
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Submitted on January 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 653
Words 136
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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