The Real Deal

Yvette M. Sanchez 1964 (Ohio)



I thought you was real,
Like the real deal.

But sadly enough,
You thought you was tough.

But, guess what your not!
And your not even hot!

You tried to bring me down,
Like I was a hound.

But I got up,
So I say kiss my butt!

I told once and twice
But three times don't cut the dice.

Your such a manipulator,
I want to play terminator.

I don't need you
To always make me blue.

Your so dumb,
Go suck your thumb.

Grow Up!
That's what's up!
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Submitted by Estrella925 on January 17, 2021

Modified on March 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BB CC XX DX EE FF GG HH DD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 415
Words 90
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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