Field Of Daises

Amanda Scheebel 1987 (Florida)



I layeth me down in a field of daises ,plucking petals one by one ,lover is in bloom. We layeth down in a field of daises ,plucking petals one by one ,lovers in bloom .We started as seeds you and I each one watering the other ,you enlightening me as I enlightened you .Over time our love grew in a field of daises ,I plucked you and you plucked me ,my love our love in a field of daises .
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Submitted by amandascheebel on January 13, 2021

Modified on April 15, 2023

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  • amandascheebel
    Field Of Daises brings back a feeling of nostalgia but then again so does all my poems that I write. It is about that first crush/love .I remember being a blooming daisy myself and would spend many a days just sitting while daydreaming and plucking petals off of daises while chanting he loves me he loves me not letting out a great sigh of releaf when down to the last petal it said yes . Lol its funny today looking back at it because now that Iam older and thus wiser I know that this is not how love works it takes time .You must be carefull in picking the right one and then plant the seed makeing sure to water it daily and give it plenty of light and then may your love grow in a field of daisies . 
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  • amandascheebel
    Field Of Daises brings on the feeling of nostalgia . This poem is about young love/that first crush . As a blooming daisy myself I remember a many days when I would sit plucking petals off of the daises and asking it if he loved me when down to the last petal I'd let out a great sigh of releaf when it had whispered yes ! Wow how foolish I was for now I know this is not how love really works .Like a daisy (you must carefully pick the right one ) you must first plant the seed and with a little watering and sunlight that love will grow into a field of daises. 
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