Beyond the Shelter



Run from the path to the front door
With paper shopping bag sagging
Under the weight of oat milk cartons
Crumbling into small rolled up balls in my palm
While hand searches pockets for the key to the lock
Do butterfly wings disintegrate in the rain like the bag?

Worn and weary, residual, wet dust on pavement
If they stop to see the long white cloud weaving
Between hill tops turning dark and damp and grey,
Feel the moisture pooling in the air and the cold wind
Breaking these pools into funneled waves of mist?

Unlock doors to weatherboard boxes
And strain acid droplets from hair, wrap
Hands and toes in warm wool socks, do butterflies crawl
Into flooding corners in the trees or sleeping bag leaves
Listening to the sound of droplets on
Thin tin or wooden roof is there now a butterfly
Slotting itself flatly through the letter sized gap  
In postbox, seeking refuge beside letters and spiders
Still lesser loved moth cousins?

We leave a window open and on the sill some cotton
Balls stuck together with the gloop
Of that sogged paper bag, atop it a coin
Weigh down the tiny bed.

About this poem

This poem shares the perspective of witnessing poverty and homelessness. In particular, a person witnessing it with a perspective of compassion and naivety,- feelings that seem more prevalent in a child than an adult counterpart, therefore framed in a context of innocence through the butterfly, using a we to still implicate the reader.

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Written on March 28, 2024

Submitted by AngelicaDoria on March 27, 2024

1:03 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABXXX XAXXX XCXXXXCXB XCXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,094
Words 210
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 9, 4

Angelica Doria

I grew up in a small town in a small country and have since moved to a small city where I now work full time and in my free time, enjoy a range of creative and active hobbies. My poems are a reflection of observations I have made of my own experience and of the rapidly changing world. more…

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