Sandcastle Kind of Love



Everywhere I look,
I see a beach with our names on it.

With waves so inviting,
I almost want to go under,
And never resurface.

And the sand that was once warm,
is now cold between my toes,
the love that used to exist here so bittersweet,
I could mourn us forever.

I see the sunsets that we used to talk about,
fading in the distance,
reminding me it’s time to let go.

I know what I have to do,
but maybe I’m just not ready for the sun to set
on the love I loved most in the world.

Maybe I’m not ready to let the waves
carry away what’s left of us,
and settle at the bottom of the ocean.

I want us to have a sandcastle kind of love,
not the kind that sinks to the ocean floor,
never to be seen again.

About this poem

I wrote this poem about letting go of someone I never wanted to live without.

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Submitted by abby.g.kangas on March 11, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XAB XXXA XXX XXX XBX XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 715
Words 170
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 4, 3, 3, 3, 3

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I am 19 years old, and I live in Virginia. I have had a short story published in an anthology before, but I am just starting to grow into becoming a writer. more…

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