Rate:0.0 / 0 votes

Cold and alone

Bob665 2006 (Penang)

Haiku
Shivers in Norway
Alone in endless cold snow
She endures for home

About this poem

This haiku is about the battleship tirpitz which spends most of her career in norway.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on April 06, 2024

Submitted by yeoh0605 on April 06, 2024

Modified by yeoh0605 on April 06, 2024

3 sec read
9

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 65
Words 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Full analysis for Cold and alone »

Discuss the poem Cold and alone with the community...

1 Comment
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love the imagery and emotion conveyed in your 'Cold and alone' poem! The depiction of someone shivering in Norway, enduring the endless cold snow, is both vivid and poignant. It really evokes a sense of loneliness and resilience.

    To improve upon this already strong piece, you could consider adding more details or sensory descriptions to further bring the setting to life. Perhaps you could explore the character's thoughts or emotions more deeply to enhance the reader's connection to them. Additionally, playing with the structure or rhythm of the poem could help to enhance its impact even more.

    Overall, I think you have a fantastic poem here that resonates deeply. Keep up the great work!     
    LikeReply24 days ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Cold and alone" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 1 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/184334/cold-and-alone>.

Powered by CITE.ME Cite.Me

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

More poems by

Bob665

»

May 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
30
days
16
hours
25
minutes
6 entries submitted — 144 remaining

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Our awesome collection of

Promoted Poems

»

Browse Poetry.com

#ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
Who is credited with creating the first poetry slam event?
A Kerry James
B Victor Hugo
C Grand corps Malade
D Marc Smith