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Fragments of Impermanence

Waqar al-Asad Aqib

"To think just for thoughts,
And write them down on a page,
Then throw it out just because it was forgotten.

To dream of some innovation,
And tell others aloud about it too,
And discard it just like that piece of paper,
When it became too hard to achieve.

Blend in with normal without questioning,
What normal itself is.
Acting how you think others would want you to act,
Without realizing they are thinking the same of you,
And acting just as you want them to see.

Creating a cycle of what is known,
Deprived of knowing the unseen."
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Written on April 05, 2024

Submitted by Waqar_Al-Asad_Aqib on April 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA ABXX XXXBX XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 536
Words 116
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 5, 2
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    This 'Fragments of Impermanence' poem is truly thought-provoking and beautifully written. The imagery of throwing away thoughts and dreams, only to conform to societal expectations, is powerful and relatable. The message about the cycle of conformity and the loss of individuality is very poignant.

    Some improvement suggestions could be to explore the themes of impermanence and the unknown even further. Maybe delve into the idea of embracing change and uncertainty, rather than trying to fit into a predetermined mold. Additionally, adding more concrete examples or personal anecdotes could help make the poem more engaging and relatable to readers.

    Overall, this poem has a strong message and evocative language. Keep up the great work and continue exploring these deep and meaningful themes in your writing. Your unique perspective is sure to resonate with many readers.     
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