The Fall of Eight

Adam N Duran 1984 (Denver Colorado)



I met a boy-
His eyes, void of joy.
hair as white as snow;
He begged thee not to go.

I do not go for crown… for gold;
nor for the riches they may hold.
I do not go for honor… for health;
nor for the tales that have yet been told.

I met a man who could not stand-
he only sat, blood and guts in hand.
skin pale and eyes white:
done was his fight.

"Platoon of eight-
We lay waste.
Nine by nine-
They piled high.
Some do cry-
while others lie;
But all must… die!"

I met a girl;
battered by the world.
she rocked to and fro;
she begged thee not to go.

I do not march for banner… for flag;
nor shall I march to conquer this land.
I do not show such dread… such fear;
though death has certainly followed thee here.

I met a man rifle in hand-
in the land for the damned.
his eyes full of hate;
I fell with the platoon of eight.

I do not die for God… for love;
nor the thing I had believed of.
for I did not wish to go to war-
only to ask… "what was it all for?"

I met a woman, all dress in black;
she kissed thy brow in a final act.
to thee, twas death she had shown.
I begged her, "please… do not let me go!"
Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Submitted by adamnduran_1 on April 04, 2024

1:23 min read
1

Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCXC DDEE FXXGGGG XXBB XDXX DXFF HHII XXXB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,127
Words 279
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 7, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Adam N Duran

The poet Adam N. Duran (also known as "The Forgotten Poet".) Is a horror and narrative Poet. Adam is also a voice actor who resides in the pacific northwest. Adam has wrote three book and is currently working on his forth. more…

All Adam N Duran poems | Adam N Duran Books

1 fan

Discuss the poem The Fall of Eight with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Fall of Eight" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 30 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/184268/the-fall-of-eight>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Adam N Duran

    »

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    0
    days
    6
    hours
    41
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Sestina is made up of how many lines?
    A 28
    B 6
    C 39
    D 36