The Final Farewell



In that quiet room where shadows play,
I saw her there, where she lay.
A silence fell, so deep and wide,
My heart just broke right there inside.

She was so still, at peaceful rest,
Upon this earth she was a guest.
My daughter, my love, in tranquil sleep,
I couldn’t help but breakdown and weep.

I collapsed upon her, holding tight,
Wishing with all my might…
For one more laugh, just one more day,
Begging for this cruel truth to fade away.

In my embrace, I tried to find,
The warmth that she left behind.
A prayer, a plea, to the sky above,
To return the light of my lost love.

But time I know waits for none,
And I knew what must be done.
With a kiss upon her brow,
I whispered my goodbyes, I’ll see you later left my lips, somehow.

I rose from her, my heart in pieces,
As the fabric of my soul creases.
With heavy shaking steps and a heavier heart,
From her stillness, I had to part.

Before I leave, my hand does rest,
Upon this blanket, soft, unpressed.
A gentle touch, a whispered sigh,
Underneath the quiet sky.

A warmth retained, though she is gone,
In this softness, love lives on.
But before I turn to face the dawn,
I touch the softness once more, and then I'm gone.

Yet in this leaving, I am found,
Her love within this blanket wound.
Though I walked away from physical form,
Our bond through love forever warm.

In heart, in soul, she walked away with me,
For in my heart she will always be!
A bond that death cannot sever,
My daughter, my love, forever and ever.

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My final farewell to my daughter

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Written on April 02, 2024

Submitted by Melody.martinez86 on April 02, 2024

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Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA FFGG HHII XXJJ CBKK LXLL MMNN OOPP
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,494
Words 330
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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