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IF I COULD SEE YOU...

Barry Green Jr 1973 (Florida)

IF I COULD SEE YOU...

If I could see you again
One more time, one more day
Knowing it was the end,
What would I do and say?

Time keeps moving, still
Around the place you once stood
I can feel you there, still
So I live as I know you would

If I could see you once again
I'd tell you I am fine, strong
I survived the pain , and laugh again
And love you all along

I can almost see you smile...

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Written on March 29, 2024

Submitted by crucifiedinhim2 on March 29, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X ABXB CDCD AEAE X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 394
Words 91
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 1
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