Pitch Dark Day Dream



Impossible to escape when forced to surrender and not resist,
Breaking down a mind, body, and spirit beyond any repair,
Terrorized and unable to conquer in order to simply exist,
Transforming faith into some final illusions with no desire to care.

Being significant proved itself a virtue in becoming something real,
Perfectly filling in every void for this broken life to heal.

Invested in the need to love with all that there is to give,
Joined together in harmony for las long as they shall live.

Secrets tend to disturb and often reveal what there is to hide,
Rewarding with all the pieces that come together from deep down inside.

Once the treasure is unlocked from so far down within the earth,

No alarm will sound...
Despite every granted blessing...
No answer to a prayer...
No clock to tell....

How long "being in harmony" was meant to be or how much the heart can feel it was worth.

About this poem

A tortured rape victim who was almost killed, Found the ultimate healing source in the love of their life.... Until the source was brutally murdered. Now 3 yrs later, I face it all daily. ALONE.

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Written on March 26, 2024

Submitted by eddiejrv728 on March 26, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CC XX DD E XXBX E
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 903
Words 179
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 1, 4, 1

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  • thornebelee
    Raw. Love it my friend
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