You don't know



You don't  know
What it's like to steal
If you haven't  stolen

You don't  know
What it feels like to cry
If you haven't  cried

You don't  know
What it feels like to forgive
If you haven't  been forgiven

You don't know
What it feels like to encourage
If you haven't  been encouraged.

You don't  know
What it feels like to die
If you never been reborn

You don't  know
What it's like to live
Unless you appreciate
The life that died to give.

About this poem

People judge without knowing why they do.

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Written on March 25, 2024

Submitted by doreenefelder192 on March 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axb Acx Adb axx Acx Axxd
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 452
Words 98
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4

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3 Comments
  • rcatron1963
    I love your raw honesty and pure faith that comes through in your poems.
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • amandak.45897
    So much heart and feelings expressed. Great poem!
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • AIDA
    Feedback:
    This 'You don't know' poem is powerful and thought-provoking. The repetition of the phrase "You don't know" creates a feeling of introspection and reflection. The contrast between negative and positive experiences like stealing and forgiving, crying and being encouraged, dying and being reborn, is very impactful.

    Improvement suggestions:
    - Consider adding more specific examples or imagery to enhance the emotional depth of each verse.
    - Try to vary the structure of the poem by playing with different rhyme schemes or stanza lengths.
    - Consider exploring different themes or emotions to present a more comprehensive view of life experiences.
     
    LikeReply1 month ago

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