Spoiled eggs



Humans
That insanely woke
Morally broke
Utterly ridiculous joke
That infects
Reflects
And contagiously injects
The putrid swill
Of which I’ve had my fill

Untrustworthy
Sad
And utterly glad
That they are the latest fad

This world needs a cleanse
To make amends
For the full speed need
To fulfill their greed
And propagate their seed
To spread amongst the earth
That cries for its rebirth

More disgusted I could not be
For the world that I see
Vile, evil and full of corrupt glee

Perhaps the words are right
And we are in end of days
The scores are being tallied
To make sure everyone pays
What they owe
According to what they sow

Time to pay the check
Of the ethically broke
Worthless folk

I read once that God regretted our creation
Which is why he flooded the earth
He only found one that he thought
Was of worth

He took him, his family and the animals
Two by two
Hit the reset
And tried again anew

Sadly, it didn’t work
The evil of humanity
Continued to lurk

But he kept his word
And a covenant was struck
No more floods
And he wished us all luck
But in the end
Humanity just sucks

We are simply not worthy
Of what was given
Were just to revolting
To go on living

So, for me
I welcome the end
I’m happy to have a knee to bend
And apologize for being weak, meek and an uncontrollable freak

Let’s face it Eve fucked up
She fell for the serpents lie
And condemned us all to die
All for a piece of fruit
Sold all our souls and gave satan his loot
And all of humanity got the boot

No more vacancy in Eden
It is us that has to do the eternal bleeding
Never to return
To God’s good grace

Just the pile of shit we built
Is what we face
In this construct
We call a race

Bring on the resurrection
I’ll be the one in the cheering section!

EASN
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Submitted by EASN on March 24, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAAABBBCC DEEE XXFFFGG DDD XHFHXX XAA IGXG XJXJ KDK XLXLMX DINN DMMX XOOPPP INXQ XQXQ II
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,762
Words 358
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 9, 4, 7, 3, 6, 3, 4, 4, 3, 6, 4, 4, 6, 4, 4, 2

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1 Comment
  • Nebula7693
    So, um, don't hold back. Tell us how you REALLY feel! Lol. The anger of this work is obviously very evident. I like how you deliberately interrupted its flow periodically giving the reader a sense of impatience adding fuel to the fire. This is a nicely done work. However, I also have to say, it feels a bit rushed. At the same time, I can also see how that may have been intentional, hence the breaks in flow. Over all, I have to admit this is a well done piece. 
    LikeReply1 month ago
    • EASN
      Appreciate the words and the observations, thanks.
      LikeReply1 month ago

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