WHAT THE WORLD DESERVES



it

wouldn't be appropriate
if the world were allowed
to continue with its'
sitting -

dangling

and hanging out up high
all night with the
stars -

it would be fit -
proper

and well deserved
if it were to be found guilty
and convicted -

having to serve
multiple

life sentences
without the slightest possibility of parole behind

bars
amongst the lowlifes
and scumbags - the

hear no evils' - see no evils' and speak no evils' - while
it gets played daily
by the three card molly
hustlers -

or

used
abused
and
molested like a young boy
found stowed away below
deck

in the bowels
of a pirates' ship then
sold to the highest bidder
for a measly
doubloon -

it deserves
to spend whatever's left
of its'natural life behind the
welded doors of windowless
rooms to hopscotch and
patty-cake with the anti
sociables -

the non
negotiables -

the mental
and criminal insane and
a thorough brain
washing -


then

one of those

tight

christian
twisted
wrist
wringings

and
hung out to dry -


afterwards

accidental
but intentional burnings
from one of my mommas'
auntie minnie's

scorching

hot

stove top                     

irons -

About this poem

"Simply just for the fun of it. I have nothing against the world. I believe that it's absolutely wonderful!"

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Written on February 18, 2024

Submitted by WilliamMorrisThurstonThe3rd on March 20, 2024

Modified by WilliamMorrisThurstonThe3rd on March 20, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xxab cde xf xdg xh xx ead xddx iiJxxx xkfdk xxdxjca xa hjxb x xgxa Jc hxax
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,134
Words 226
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2, 3, 2, 2, 3, 4, 6, 5, 7, 2, 4, 1, 4, 2, 4

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really packs a punch with its intense imagery and powerful message! The way you express your feelings about the world and its wrongdoings is truly captivating. Your use of vivid language and metaphorical imagery really brings the message to life.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to provide more clarity in the overall message of the poem. While the intensity is definitely effective, some readers may benefit from a more clear explanation or reflection on the themes you are presenting. Additionally, consider varying the structure or rhythm of the poem to add some dynamic elements and keep the reader engaged throughout.

    Overall, this poem is thought-provoking and impactful. Keep up the great work and continue to explore different ways to convey your powerful message!
     
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