We Finally Made It

Brent J.W Foreman 1983 (Bremerton)



>>HOOK<<<
we finally made it.
we finally made it.
got a brand-new jag dawg
platinum nickel plated
million dollar mansion
jet so fast the playas hate it
so much ice on the body the whole world can skate it.

we finally made it.
we finally made it.
got a brand-new jag dawg
platinum nickel plated
million dollar mansion
jet so fast the playas hate it
so much ice on the body the whole world can skate it.

 >>>VERSE #1<<<
In this life I strive to stay humble but,
sometimes the weight of the world
would cause me to stumble
instead of falling on my face
I ball up my fist and scrape knuckle the black sheep all trouble
but still fam loves you so fans double,
on the mic we take it to a new level
bumping bass and treble
from the woods to the ghetto.

About this poem

this is a hook and verse from a song on my P.C.P recordz collection.

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Written on March 26, 2013

Submitted by LOONe on March 14, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aBBACDBB BBACDBB xxxexeeeex
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 753
Words 158
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 10

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