Flatlined

Flora Poole 1982 (Hagerstown, md)



Flat lined

I got him

Y'all's relationship flat line

I got him, and he wants what I have to offer and have

To give

I got him he loves the way we have hot passionate love sessions

I got him he no longer wants you calling nor texting him

I got him

And he very satisfied

Each and Every time

Hollering and screaming and moaning out my name

I'm the one too blame

For how he is so obsessively

Loves being driven insane

By our bodies against

Sided, by side, on top of one another

I got him

And he sings how happy we're together

He no longer wants the past ex's or anyone else

To treasure

I got him, and I'm the only one he wants to pleasure

Sorry though y'all relationship went completely flat lined now he doesn't want either of y'all back anytime

He definitely won't ever change his mind

There is no comparison when it involves you with me

Oh, can't you see y'all's relationship failed and flat lined

Y'all could not ever compare too me

I got him all the time and he very pleased with

How I aim too please

I got him

N he wants to get on his knees

Because I'm the only woman he can see that

Satisfies him just more than he has ever been pleased

I got him

Y'all's relationship flat line

I got him, and he wants what I have to offer and have

To give

I got him he loves the way we have hot passionate love sessions

I got him he no longer wants you calling nor texting him

I got him

And he very satisfied

Each and Every time

Hollering and screaming and moaning out my name

I'm the one too blame

For how he is so obsessively

Loves being driven insane

By our bodies against

Sided, by side, on top of one another

I got him

And he loves that I love to aim and please

I got him, he's wanting to get on his knees

So y'all know he no longer interested

And y'all's relationship ain't no longer it completely flat lined

He finally got the one he wants, needs

That makes him whole and more complete

Written by :flora Poole aka, violet Poole

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Written on February 29, 2024

Submitted by flora_p on March 13, 2024

2:17 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme A B C D A A E F G G H I J K A k x k f l h l h x m A m x x A B C D A A E F G G H I J K A m m x l x x x
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,973
Words 435
Stanzas 51
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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