Love right ?
When I think about love
I bite my tongue
On how people cross fingers to cross-roads
In the distant coming future
With their present Lovers
Breaking apart is certain,
When brains and Hearts decide to repel
Nor rewriting of vows,
Nor refill of happiness ,
Nor apologies ,
Will stop the breaking into dust
Of past strong love bonds
Air may be the cause of death
In the breaking down of toxic love
The chemistry you came with
Turned into spheres of unwavering fear
of falling in love again
Some see ropes as an easier path
Some dissolve into trauma
Some seek vengeance
Some take alcohol showers
It’s not clear which will live peace
Or the range of healing one might take
Not all rocky rounds lead to grassy and softy ends
Not only appearance of darkness but also light can cause blindness
Even answers can live you uncertain
Yes, You can claim life is unfair,
But what if fair ?.
About this poem
This poem about is my experiences of wanting to be loved by the same person which ended up breaking me when things didn’t work the way I thought they would. I also combined my observations on what people do when love doesn’t work they way the imagined it would. So it lives a mark of bitterness or anger sometimes leading into suicide, also trauma.
Written on January 11, 2024
Submitted by lusindisorayo on February 16, 2024
- 55 sec read
- 0 Views
Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXXXB CXXDXXX XAXXX XXXBXX XDCEE |
---|---|
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 901 |
Words | 186 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 7, 5, 6, 5 |
Translation
Find a translation for this poem in other languages:
Select another language:
- - Select -
- 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
- 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
- Español (Spanish)
- Esperanto (Esperanto)
- 日本語 (Japanese)
- Português (Portuguese)
- Deutsch (German)
- العربية (Arabic)
- Français (French)
- Русский (Russian)
- ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
- 한국어 (Korean)
- עברית (Hebrew)
- Gaeilge (Irish)
- Українська (Ukrainian)
- اردو (Urdu)
- Magyar (Hungarian)
- मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
- Indonesia (Indonesian)
- Italiano (Italian)
- தமிழ் (Tamil)
- Türkçe (Turkish)
- తెలుగు (Telugu)
- ภาษาไทย (Thai)
- Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
- Čeština (Czech)
- Polski (Polish)
- Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
- Românește (Romanian)
- Nederlands (Dutch)
- Ελληνικά (Greek)
- Latinum (Latin)
- Svenska (Swedish)
- Dansk (Danish)
- Suomi (Finnish)
- فارسی (Persian)
- ייִדיש (Yiddish)
- հայերեն (Armenian)
- Norsk (Norwegian)
- English (English)
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"Love right ?" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/182442/love-right-?>.
Discuss the poem Love right ? with the community...
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In