My Sky

Lachlan Gear 2006 (logan)



Oh on this is the day,
i wish to ask you to stay;
I wish to see the beautiful you,
with a ring on and say "I do";
I wish to see you in a trousseau,
walking down the aisle with that lovely glow;
I wish to hear you say your vows,
then see me look at you with my heart ploughed;
I wish you were still here,
then i would have nothing to fear;
I wish that it was both of us,
at i atleast should have seen the bus;
I wish you weren't you so far away,
even in the night;
I wish i had the courage to meet you,
but my cowardice is stronger than i thought;
Goodbye

About this poem

This poem is about the one moment in life that was my happiest and worst day of my fictional life

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Written on February 15, 2024

Submitted by lachie.gear06 on February 14, 2024

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Scheme AABBCDCEFGCCAHBIJ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 554
Words 137
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

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