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Thank You Fir The Iced Milku (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)

Thank You For The Iced Milku   (Bussokusekika)

Do you remember
Sachiko Takahata
The night that we danced
On Okinawa Japan
You made me feel happiness
After what happened to me
Thank you for the iced milku

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   3/6/2024

About this poem

As Billy Idol once sang…I was dancing with myself thinking about my MST downing red horse and steinlager when an angel asked me if I’d allow her to dance with me…She had no idea of what I was thinking at that time…And if it were not for her…I might not be here today…Thank you for being there when I needed you child of joy and happiness… ✌️⛄️

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Written on March 07, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on March 07, 2024

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Scheme A XBBXXXA X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 246
Words 44
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 1
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