The Locked Door

Steve Cochrane 1955 (Cape)



You shut the door and did no more.
What did I do to you?
Why won't you tell why all's not well
And why we are now through?

I have not changed, so it is strange
That you have walked away.
You did not share why you don't care
And what I did that day!

Please let me know and I will go,
If that will help you be
More happy when I'm gone and then
You will be rid of me!

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Written on March 04, 2024

Submitted by stevec.24118 on March 04, 2024

Modified by stevec.24118 on March 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 366
Words 90
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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  • alanswansea18
    Beautiful. I do have a couple of locked door poems that are different.
    LikeReply1 month ago

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