Fumaças Pesadas



Cigarro um impulso, um sonho, um trago, acordo suando olhando para minha mão e esperando ter um cigarro, agora eu ansiava pelo trago, sucção para realidade, cada tragada me colocava mais perto da terra, era uma sensação de estar flutuando a fumaça me fazia ficar pesado, pesado como os demais, fumar era uma forma de me aproximar dos meus semelhantes ?
Pensamento distorcido como um isqueiro sem gás, a pedra e a engrenagem funcionam, mas o gás se foi, evaporou antes de inflamar, faltou a combustão para gerar uma aproximação, sem ele eu fico sem o peso, sem encostar no chão.

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Angústia, Amor e Subjetividade

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Written on February 26, 2024

Submitted on February 26, 2024

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