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Hi car, am I cool?

Gabriel Stoodley 1985 (Canada)

Haiku
Alpha Romero
gliding, rolling over shifts
adrenaline pump

every breath now
in sync with the speed of pace
heartbeat races on

jets in front and back
eyes are moving back and forth
so close and so far

watch out a tight squeeze
speeding up and slowing down
one more lap the end

on the final stretch
max out speed and sneak passed him
winner of the race!!

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A haiku about a speedy racecar.

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Written on October 20, 2023

Submitted by M_Lucas_Frost on February 22, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XAX XXX XXX XXA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 355
Words 71
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
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