Ribbons



                                     Ribbons

Having untied a bow, I am left with a ribbon.
What it was and what it is will always be the same.
Something becomes another,
when it is twisted and knotted.
Until it is unraveled, it will never change

Sometimes the ribbon is stuck in a bow
and is in need of help.
Unwinding is always a scary thing.
Safe as a bow, it stays the same,
never experiencing the thrill of being unraveled.

Knotted and twisted it remains.
Reaching out for the breeze, the bow
tries to unwind.
But deep inside, the twist is tight.
The bow is pretty,
and still the knot remains.

About this poem

I wanted to express the feeling of change being scary and exciting at the same time.

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Submitted by James12 on January 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXXX BXXAX CBXXXC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 601
Words 121
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6

James Gustafson

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  • zachhartfordtucker
    It’s concise, it has a nice rhythm, and I like the questions it asks.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • asmith2024
    I really loved the way this poem read along with its symbolism. It brings new perspective and I really appreciate that.
    LikeReply2 months ago

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