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Feelings

Fithalene Noor 1984 (Perak)

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Wish I could converse to somebody
About my affection towards you
Wish I had a truly trustworthy friend
To embed this peculiar fondness

Yet, no one would understand
No one would agree to this accidental sentiments
And there would be arguments
Between me and my friends

Above all, I just need someone to listen
Someone who’s completely a silent
Who can bare the maximum words of burden
Inside my brain

I wish to run to a secret universe
Where an ooze can offer you on how to converse
A unity and mind are a diverse
And trustworthy is a peacefulness.

About this poem

When a hidden feeling is oppressed inside, this made it into words. It's in the point of view of a forbidden love.

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Written on January 25, 2024

Submitted by ctnurhafizahmn on January 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXA XBBX CXCX DDDA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 553
Words 103
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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Fithalene Noor

I grew up in a small town in the north of Malaysia. Now, I was in a big town of Malaysia. I enjoy nature and outdoors activities. I love writing poems and playing guitar. Sometimes, things around me become my muse in writing words. I have two beautiful children and I am a primary school teacher major in English Language. more…

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