My life

Atul K 1979 (Punjab)



My Life has turned into,
Like it is a Facebook reel,
I tried to make them good,
But the wounds don't heal

I misplaced my charm,
Lost the vigorous zeal,
My heart is now a stone,
And it has lost the feel

Today the fate has played,
Just an unpleasant game,
I tried a lot to tackle it up,
But was not able to tame

In search of the happiness,
I emptied my entire pack,
Now where I can fetch bliss,
Just let me know some hack

The sky today looks shattered,
And sad seems the moon,
I know it will shine definitely,
If she promises to see me soon

About this poem

It is all about separation phase....

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Submitted by mandeepginni163 on January 16, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 542
Words 129
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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