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My deep pain and loss

Leah C. Auger 1981 (Athabasca)

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I miss you already why did you have to be so Greedy?
I hate that this happened to you, I warned you to be careful not Needy.
I remember the days when you and I would put make-up on side by side.
I wish you'd have known how much I loved you inside.

I'll always remember the good memories about you my cuz. Love you forever.

About this poem

This poem is dedicated and written to my late cousin Melinda.

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Submitted by leaha.22855 on January 07, 2024

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Scheme AABB X
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 323
Words 71
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 1
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