Is it okay?



Is it okay for you? To love me? Knowing that I'll overthink everything u say?

You softly stop me from asking, "is it okay"?
But

I need you to be honest with me!
Is it okay for you? To love me? Knowing that I'll cry after every fight?

I am quite exhausted from being strong!
Is it okay for you to let me sleep next to you? When I want you to hold me tight?

The nightmares have made me a little tired!
But is it okay if I need you to tell me how much things done by me are admired?

Is it okay for you to love me? When I need my mind to be called beautiful before my body to be called hot?

Is it okay for you to love me? I need you i really do! But can u stop pushing me aside?

Is it okay if i want u to gently wrap me in your arms when I'm done crying?

I will always love you but?
Is it okay for you to be a man my future daughter can always call?

It is okay for you!!!! To be a man because of who?
My future son can say "I learned how to love? From you two!"

Is it okay for you? If i need you to love me forever? And ever? Without measure?
It would be my pleasure
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Submitted by Diyaa1_503 on February 05, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A AB XC XC DD X X X BX EE FF
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,074
Words 259
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2

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