Ego Bowling

Falling Awake 1991 (New Jersey)



They’re all keeping scores
Past these red, rusty doors
Shadows casted from the neon light             
Fall on rubber ducks sitting so tight          
In the quarter-turn vending machine              
Their faded beady eyes have seen   
Everything from love bloom on the lanes     
To a time when the carpet had less stains

From old boots to shoes styled proper
All find their way into an old locker
Now on equal footing, but still they cling
To their egos—it’s a recurring thing
As they play, their primal patterns are seen
Motions, thoughts, and all in between
And with any small misstep or stutter
The ball easily lands down in the gutter

But watch the strikes and you’ll see
Someone consistent, calm as can be
Moving with both patience and flow
But even the winner, it's important to know
All along, there was never any rival
Doesn’t matter if you made it to the final.

About this poem

An exploration of ego through the lens of bowling--- a response to a challenge to use bowling and rubber duckies in the same poem.

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Written on February 03, 2024

Submitted by FallingAwake on February 03, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDD EEFFCCEE GGHHII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 887
Words 159
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 6

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