My Struggling Hardship.



What didn't this life do,
Neither did anything less,
Nor did it hurt less,
It has given alien pain only,

Whatever earned, earned by knocking,
What not made, made to dance a lot,
Made to rotate and spin like a top,
My hard work was not appreciated,
I was badly scolded in every way,
My feelings and honesty were not respected,
My loyalty was not considered,
Despite all these circumstances
I kept myself and under control,
I understood that life is to keep struggling,
I will continue to take right steps
To shape myself and my future,
I will have to show my respect to the world,
Therefore, my struggle will continue
Until I don't get the desired result...............

About this poem

This poem is based on a struggling fellow who is not cared for his good deeds and keeps suffering.

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Written on January 29, 2024

Submitted by brijmohan_p on January 31, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBX CXXDXDXXXCXXXAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 669
Words 135
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 15

Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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