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I'm feared of

Anton Deaf 2005

I'm feared of 2 things
I'm feared of loneliness and death
I'm scared they won't notice me at day
And though they won't at night
I want to create
I want to love, I want to see
I want to hear, I want to speak
I will be long dead from my shape
But I Hope in those shapes
In shapes of a few, or a few millions
I will live
In joyful moments of my kids and their grandkids
I want to be memorized by strangers
I will be long dead from my shape
But I will live in those shapes
At the start I only fear of 2 things
I'm only feared the loneliness and death
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Written on January 21, 2024

Submitted by georgia5 on January 26, 2024

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Scheme abcdefgHijklmHiab
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 546
Words 118
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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1 Comment
  • luisestable1
    luisestable1
    There is a pairing here that seems not to work well logically: They not to notice you by day, but they to notice you at night. This seems to run contrary to sense.
    Another aspect, the logic or coherence of the poem is lacking a bit in comprehension. The lines are not a good accord with each other. Some modifications would do them good. 
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • georgia5
      georgia5
      I'm not following the logics or a good sense of accordion. I'm writing the way I feel right. Not the way others want to read it right.
      LikeReply3 months ago

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