Rotten Fruit



Rotten Fruit

Prompt: Dear God, She's Not Ready To Go!

The taste of bitterness fills my soul
As I stand by this apple tree
If breaking me was your goal
Well then, you definitely made me see

I stare at the gnarled limbs
Lost deep in thought
The world slowly dims
The ground begins to rot

You definitely carved your mark
Upon this rough wood
Igniting a deep spark
As best as you could

I fall to my knees
On this soft murky ground
Deep amongst the trees
My soul, lays tortured and bound

I look up at the withered fruit
As they witness my agony
Like an old twisted root
That's festering inside me

I scream out to the soul-less sky
Because the pain is buried deep
I beg to God as I cry
Please don't put her to sleep

A.D. Small
January 25, 2024
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Written on January 25, 2024

Submitted by amberp.35129 on January 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X ABAB CXCX DEDE FGFG HBHB IJIJ XB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 745
Words 156
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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