Some Steel Sings



First brought with a wraith that's lost
Death sang to a black hole taunt
Cold in the south of the spot that bang
Hardest thought is the one that rang
Chimney hot from the pot mixed potions
Some cling rot others cling devotion
Done wrought what a symptom covets
Covens taught with a thought most closed in
Ring ring ring not if it's caught in broken
Not lost in a thought less frozen
Drip drip come equipped ladybug snug
One shot be the broken glass chosen
Mirrors talk like an instrument possessed
Bring me more isn't choice it's a motion
Compress what's the best no less most in
Let's talk what a thought bread to birds rest
Music stop put a not music rest rest
I puff my chest to the rose of a corpse grip
Let it know if I let it go I really let it rest
Put away is a thunder in a box breath
Couldn't open grimace scold to the hold of grim
Ring ring
Desert cold in the night better drown
In the sun of your love wouldn't shut down
Never talk when a stick starts to walk dance
Make a principle a bowl of best wouldn't be it's the principle
To press that shirt squeeze the sauce of a less inscription
Bring a head that can talk shrunk first silver spooned
Last brought in the wrought of a golden pharaohs tomb
Hear me mocking my own words to the crows better not wake
Sleep deep in the slept through one two need an intermission stuck again inception
Call the grass talking wind hear the storm say twist
Take a turn now your in too deep clear skies still I see mist
Couldn't see out the straight to eyes two eyes aren't enough to know why I'm here
Let it creep to your core
Ring ring I'm here
Blood talk blood walk drip drip better sing to my death my dear
I'm a walking candle burnt to dust in the grain of the tree from the sands of time I came
Speak the same as the desert floor who's here is my gun of thought fire burn in the mist of cheer pow pow
What a Jinx is my wrist chomp chomp let it fly pow pow hit a champ revamp scepter soul wrist skull to the aim of my take
Revamp vampiric scepter soul steal metamorphosis.

About this poem

I used to record songs. I rapped for many years and made around 100 hours of recorded tracks and I never released the majority of what I considered the purest of the mark I was trying to make on the world with my music. This upset me. So I download a notepad and put something down taking a step forward towards both a release of my built up energies and a mark I could make on the Universe once again. This is what I wrote.

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Written on January 18, 2024

Submitted by Redtimeglobal2 on January 18, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDEFGEEHEIEGIIJIKLMNNOPEAQRESSTUTVWXRY
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,023
Words 402
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 41

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