greetings from the Blue World



Greetings from the Blue World


Removed the mask and laid
in the soft warm coffin so late
as the sun drowns, struggle in vain
the vision be vivid no strain


levitating hand is skinnier than usual
pins and needles in the foot not unusual
oceanic waves in the eyes, its full moon
this overflowing ocean will dry up soon


white ray of light pierced the roof
thought, thunder lightning no proof
shining blue floating hair rise
like meteors in the empty space

"welcome to my  world she" said.
 confused head

blue world the mystic world, entered
purple mountains, warm grass surrendered
peace and happiness converge
sudden blare, woke up, la fin.

About this poem

this poem is about a girl who reaches the blue world of happiness. the girl cries herself to sleep and found happiness, but in a few seconds she is back to reality. there is no escape from reality.

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Written on December 21, 2023

Submitted by devikasmail2 on December 21, 2023

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Scheme X XXAA BBCC DDXX EE FFXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 644
Words 120
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4

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