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The brightness

Nichola oakes 1985

The brightness

The brightness
The lightness
The creation of joy

Christmas...

There seams to be a happiness
That's like an emptiness

Like a glacier to my soul
A glassyness, if that makes sense
Amplified within my bones.

The sights, the sounds, the trigger
It's all that some can see

Not me, not me

I'm changing my glaciers
And I'll clean up all my glass
And I'll carry on
And I'll last, I'll last

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A mirrored effect of Christmas emmotion

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Written on October 12, 2023

Submitted by Nicci9919 on December 10, 2023

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Scheme AAX AA XXX XB B XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 411
Words 90
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 2, 1, 4
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