Poor Debtor. ( Humours Poem ).

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Don't ask anything lender,
I have become bankrupt now,
My wife has run away without notice,
Putting a big lock on the house,

Whenever you asked me about my condition,
It is as if you are worshiping me with your shoe,
Don't come in front of me lender,
I am totally broken-hearted person,
My pocket has busted without wallet in it,

The more your belly is outer side,
The more it is inside mine,
The more your cheeks are swollen,
The more deflated I am, you see,

Your shirt with gold buttons,
The trousers also look expensive,
Seeing you, half of my life has dried up,
Even my face has turned half black,

Your interest is heavier than original,
Whoever fell in your trap,
Understand that his opinion has been defeated,
He has become his own mess,
You are such a clever and cruel businessman............

About this poem

A debtor who lended money from a lender without taking any care and he was surrounded by many problems, became bankrupt and started starving.

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Written on November 10, 2000

Submitted by brijmohan_p on January 05, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX BXABX XXBX XXXX XXXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 803
Words 170
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 4, 5

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For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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