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3:28

Sensitivity m

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Your hands are at your pockets
Maybe
They are hiding something - from - me
Some
Invitations with sweet cakes and bitter coffee
Money
Or truthful poetry written by me  - for - you

Your wise - cute  Twiggy face
Smiling like naked universe
Cheeks are expanding over your strong bones
Now is time for deep kiss around our throats
You are beautiful



On the end of your hands
I can feel forgotten smells from your previous loverman  
Silver shining glitters

 

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Written on December 31, 2023

Submitted by sensitive_m on December 31, 2023

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Scheme XAAXAAX XXXXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 469
Words 99
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 3
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