Presence of your love

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



Awe speaks in my unclaimed ear
I hear your presence and it moves me to tears
My eyes aglow yet gushing like babes who understand the awe and why? they whisper, can't you love me some more.
How I feel your presence
Within these feelings cold
Do I deserve to cry over you
Is the beauty of all this world really true
I freefall in your time and release my calls
In the silent tunes that fill my walls
I can't seem to explain these things
That I never really knew beyond imaginings
And red raw with emotions bare
I know your loving mind does stare
I am here but are you there
In glories truth that holds you too
I wanted to feel but it feels too much
Each tender word and loving touch
A taste of you, of infinity
I don't know if it's you, in the silence, leading the way
But I hope your love is here to stay
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Written on December 30, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 30, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on December 30, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFFGGHBIIIFJJKLL
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 807
Words 166
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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