When The Law Shut Down Your Dreams

Christen Kuikoua 2007 (United States)



In a world where I am Christen Kuikoua,
Yet each day, I question if it's truly me.
I can act, sing, and model with passion,
But my dreams face a relentless decree.

Every aspiration met with a crushing sound,
As though someone's there to pull me down.
It's a daily struggle, a living hell,
Where critiques and judgments persist and swell.

Like You sing Like a Toad they proclaim,
Or like Your Face Looks Like a Baboon, the shame.
"You're too fat to be a model," they sneer,
Injecting poison, stoking my fear.

I long to break free from this binding chain,
To live without worry, without disdain.
Why must every word and comment sting?
Is it my race that causes such a fling?

Proud of the black hue, I didn't choose,
But why does the world harbor so much abuse?
Can't we exist without constant dread,
Without fearing the moment we leave our bed?

As a young teen, insults weigh heavy,
Trying to navigate a world that's unsteady.
Yearning to find my place and voice,
Yet hatred makes it an unbearable choice.

What can I do, what can I say,
To be heard, supported, to find my own way?
Why does it feel like I don't deserve life?
Am I not human, deserving of strife?

The pain cuts deep, like a sword to the chest,
Critics abound, making me second-guess.
Creating my own content, using my own art,
Yet accusations fly, tearing me apart.

Too young for social media, they claim,
Or a cyberstalker turns my life into a game.
Fake police threats and accusations unfair,
No one believes, and it feels like a snare.

Broken and shattered, lost in the debris,
Yearning to vanish, to find some decree.
Can someone lend a helping hand,
Guide me through this desolate land?

About this poem

This Poem (When The Law Shut Down Your Dreams) By Christen kuikoua. Was redited On all poetry platforms on December 27, 2023. This poem reflects the struggles, challenges, and emotional turmoil experienced by the speaker, who identifies as Christen Kuikoua. The poem delves into themes of self-identity, discrimination, hatred, and the desire for freedom and acceptance. The speaker expresses a sense of not feeling true to themselves despite their talents in acting, singing, and modeling. They describe facing constant criticism and negativity from others, including hurtful comments about their appearance and race. The poem touches on the pain of racial prejudice and the difficulty of navigating a world filled with hatred and discrimination. The speaker also conveys a desire for freedom from the judgment and negativity that surrounds them. They question why there is so much hatred in the world and express frustration about being targeted for being black. The poem highlights the emotional distress caused by cyberstalking, false accusations, and the lack of support or belief from others. In the latter part of the poem, the speaker expresses a deep sense of brokenness, feeling shattered and lost. The plea for help and the desire to vanish into the void convey a profound sense of despair and hopelessness. The poem ultimately calls for understanding, support, and a way to navigate the challenges and discrimination faced by the speaker. 

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Written on August 17, 2022

Submitted by ChristenKuikouafans on December 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB XXCC DDEE FFAA XXGG BBHH IIJJ XXKK DDLL BBMM
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,663
Words 351
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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