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BEAUTIFUL YOU

Mark Schroettner

Ah ... beautiful you!
Going out on a date is something we should do
So stimulating yet I feel like a fool
Gawking at you isn't so cool.

Oh ... you're simply superb!
When will I get the nerve?
So tantalizing yet so humble
Strolling along, staring at you, cause me to stumble
Your intoxicating beauty make me crumble.

About this poem

This was written 10/18/2000. This was published in the anthology 2001-Poetic Odyssey and Copyright 2001 by The Famous Poets Society. Copyright 2023 by sweetslimited.

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Written on October 18, 2000

Submitted by markanthonyschroettner on December 24, 2023

Modified by markanthonyschroettner on January 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXCCC
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 316
Words 62
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 5
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