Set Free So I Can Finally Just Be Me



Is there anyone out there
I have been calling for someone real
There are these sensations if there was
Plus the voices and noises in my head

If  there is anyone out there
Please I am begging you I need help
Ie been waiting to be set free
So I can I can finally just be me

It feels like I am in a nightmare
I don´t know what is real anymore
But it feels like I can wake from this one
I keep on having so many thought
that makes me feel like I am all alone

I call for help but there is no answer I Keep hitting the gates the gates of freedom  but they won´t break
Constantly begging and begging for a rescuer
But life won´t send one as if I don´t deserve it
Everything in my eyes now seems so fake

Just keep getting stabbed in the back over and over
Setting and burning me into a thousand flames
Is this a sign that I do not deserve to have this life
Or is this a sign that I am the big issue

How come all of this keeps happening
Why oh why is there no one coming to rescue
All I am asking and begging for is to be set free
That way I can finally at last be

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Written on December 16, 2023

Submitted by nerf.kin88 on December 19, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXX AXBB AXXXX CDXC DXXE XEBB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,072
Words 238
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4

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