Breaking
When I look at you,
My body gets so hot, like a pot of el dente pasta.
Man I thought I lost ya.
My love for you is
Unconditional, so
Original, not always so traditional.
That’s in our own
Way that’s official.
A penny for your thoughts?
I’m so distraught.
Your complete,
Beautiful self always
Swimming in my thoughts.
Man love is so precious, I thought I lost. My life’s mission,
Never let that happen
At all costs.
This is my one and only shot.
I will make the best decisions, deciding with precision.
With only loving
Conditions. I am so
Glad your giving it
One more shot your opening of your heart.
You know we are one
We feel each other,
Almost reading each other’s thoughts.
God, I didn’t realize it would be this hard, the matters of our hearts.
It’s time to open our hearts and fight for each other along the way, even if we have to smell each others
Farts.
Get the deck of cards ,
Lay down your hand , as well do I and we show each others hearts.
About this poem
Heartbreak, a traumatic break up.
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Written on November 24, 2023
Submitted by fckccck86 on December 18, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 985 |
Words | 209 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 30 |
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