Saving Grace
CANDACE ROELLY M. CARILLO 1999 (Digos City)
Alone,
I wiped the raindrops off the coffin
And dropped a flower in my dead dreams.
Have I not grieved enough?
Answers,
Were delivered as I looked
At the graves of all the promises I broke.
Grief was the shards twisting my resting hours.
Doomed
As light enticed me like moths to a flame
It stung how your eyes gave so much sunshine
Why did it hold such allure?
Wondrous
like a child, curious like a cat
You were an illusionist, I was a believer;
Fed with fantasy, poisoned in a bitter reality
Cold
Under the drizzle of a brewing storm,
Flood drew my roots off a melted ground
Am I slipping away?
Imagine
How blood generously gave warmth
When drawn by touching the sharpest scythe,
Left you cold when it was caressed deep in your soul.
Mad
That I am no longer a favorite
For not thriving in a preconceived reality.
Will I strike another deal?
Bargained
The castle in the air,
The future we envisioned together
In exchange for a piny relief, I screamed defeat
Loved
The comfort sadness had given
When the suffering was far from forgiving.
was it my best friend?
Monsters
They made to frighten, now a company
to my dark days lovingly combing the frays.
Taming brittles, praising strands from falling astray.
Cursed
The heavens in my mind deceiving -
A cove as life served punishments.
What coddles me after?
Entranced
By how a mirage cradled my entirety
Into safety when the other side of me was in shambles.
My vision now snapshots of dull colors, a house full of horrors
About this poem
This poem is in a free verse form. This is all about grief, discouragement, escape, defeat, sadness, and self-contempt. Writing all these negative emotions in me gave me an outlet to make it beautiful.
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Written on November 06, 2023
Submitted by Tardiee on November 17, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,485 |
Words | 305 |
Stanzas | 12 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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