Feelings

Nyasa Doshi 2003 (Bharuch)



Thinking that this poem is read by many,
The feeling of happiness spreads thats worth than any penny

You know i had somewhat scary life before,
This feeling of fear made me realise all the things that befall

The feeling of sadness doesnt come too often,
But having no true friend once made me soften  
That past days really made me sad,
But now this days doesnt seem that bad

The feeling of comfortness for me,
Its when i am dancing that many cant see
I do lots of expressions through my face,
Some people truely can see all the moments that i embrace
This expressions may be happy,sad,angryor of hate,
But people relate and accept it as if its their fate

The feeling of hatred has no place in my life,
Why to hate someone when everything can be sorted by a laugh

Damn! I lost my 2 strands of hair today;this i really hate,
Its the first time i got angry;i guess many people can hopefully relate

Making people happy;what a great feeling it is,
Its the feeling of content that i can say with surety

Gliding through my body is this feeling of sweet pain,
Playing and exercising daily has so many things to gain

The feeling of mystery is as blue as sapphire,
Its felt even by just holding the hands of the person u truely admire

I know this feeling of romance is just a strange key,
But i wish it to be  so deep that can bring me first on my knees

Here comes the best feeling; its of love,
Its just felt though it seems another word
2 lines are not enough for portraing this feeling
Some might say that it sometimes do wound healing
Others might say its when your loved one gives you shoulder for leaning
But for me i guess its the warm and permanent feeling
 
I wish all the good feelings that you came after
And  i hope to be the reasons for your every laughter
I know writing this way is just a small art,
But i truely wish that it can make its way to your heart .

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Written on November 11, 2023

Submitted by nyasadoshi2502 on November 11, 2023

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Scheme AA XX BBCC AADDEE XX EE XA FF GX AX XXHHHH GGII
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,893
Words 405
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 4, 6, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 6, 4

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