Energy

Fabian Dunn 2006 (Kingston)



Her energy orphic, your presence is venust; I love being around her, I truly love the way she treats me. To her, she thinks shes not all that and every other girl that surrounds her is better than her in every aspect but to me her energy, her aura they both are incomprehensible to the other women out there.

They can't treat people the way she does her heart, mind and soul is in the right place and she's not negative whatsoever.

She snatched my heart away from my body, around her I'm in the most vulnerable state I've ever been.

I'll die for her, I'll kill for her, for her I'll do anything but I think to myself would she do the same.

All the things that I've done for her and will do for her will she return that favor or she'll accept it without giving me anything in return.

That's alright but it's not at the sametime because while I'm giving my all to her she gives me nothing in return but I love her and I'll do anything for her.

About this poem

This poem is about a man describing the girl he wants.

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Written on February 03, 2023

Submitted by mallyxkage03 on November 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A X X X A
Characters 946
Words 194
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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